The Diary about Twelve...

The Diary entry ...

2008-04-08T11:36:00.000-07:00

Hey John ....[the name of my diary ],

Yesterday was a terrible night. I never thought such a thing could happen!
It was like a nightmare or an action movie I don't know .. Istill have to take time
to make up ma mind ..

but now I will tell u what happened .
Yesterday was the New Years Eve , finally ...
I was reallyl excited how it would be and what kind of girls would be at the party
[maybe some models or sth like this , it will be a JACKPOT!!!].
In the beginning it was cool I hung up with some friends killing Wodka , smoking Weed
n listen to Bob Marley.
The party wasn't very special but it was ok cause later
some girls came over and we had some fun.
And as I wanted to go with one of the girls up to the bedroom
We heard people yelling and shouting and I thought
damn man! u should go there maybe sth will happen so I moved my ass
to the crowd and saw a white pale guy punching an another guy the pimples out of his face.
They talked a little bit , I couldn't understand because I keep yelling that they should fight.
Suddenly the pale guy ran upstairs and interrupt a black guy at fucking .
Damn man ... he really had bad luck.
They talked and suprisedly the nigga shot at him .
FUCK!!! why this shit happend at the party this was my first thought and I ran away hoping that
he won't kill me and as I passed the doorway I heard more shots but it sounds different
like an uzi or sth like this, so I turned around and saw the nigga getting killed .
I kept running and hide behind a tree to see waht will happen .
You just hear and saw people yelling screaming cryying and running ...
it was terrible like a nightmare .
But the people out there have to know about this so I pulled out my handy and rec .. ed it
and telling a friend to call the police .
After 5 minutes a special teamor sth like this appeared and request him to come out .
Surprisingly he came out but then I couldn't believe what I saw
he shot at the police !!! he's crazyy man!
but this "fight" wasn't long
cause they shot back and he had so many holes that u can't count ...
It was all over ... I walked home and took a shower
to take a break,
to make up ma mind
and know I'm telling all this , the thing that happened to u ..
I bet if u r real u wouldnÄt believe this shit ..
cause I wouldn't belive by myself
but this shit is real ...
to real

c ya tomorrow .. gn

Dante

---- plz don't see the shortcuts or slang as a mistake .. I write it like this because a teenager at
such a party won't write it all out like you = u , thx ... ---------------------------------

Chris

2008-03-18T15:18:00.000-07:00

Chris is hopping to have sex with someone at this party
so he prepared himself with condoms, cleaned out his "dirty"things ( porn e.t.c.)
and took a shower [ shaving and all the stuffs to look perfect ]

Gangster District Harlem Task 4

2008-03-17T15:50:00.000-07:00

- the end of the crack cocaine epidemic and the strong economy

-instead of rising the young immigrants they rise the rate of
adults who commit fewer crimes

-broken windows theory

these are some notes ... I tried to understand the whole text.. but it didn't work
so I just posted some notes ...
maybe you could help me to understand this part of the text.. :

Recent years have seen some of these successes reversed. At the same time, a fluctuating economy did nothing to reverse the crime rate. Some proponents of the arguments that social and economic drive crime rates were no longer convinced that these arguments gave the full picture.

Chapter 31 - 41

2008-03-16T13:27:00.000-07:00

Chapter 31 : The piranha

Tobias and Molly are talking about their pets and how hard the model life is.
After they called in Tobias asks Molly if she wants to see his piranha.
She accept.
They walk to Claude because he has keep his piranha there, in the guest room.
After Tobi had showed how the fish has lacerated the rotisserie-cooked chicken
she says she has to leave.
Tobi invites her to the New Year's Eve and she had said that she will come.

Chapter 32 : The forensic test

The forensic test have identified that the blood on Hunters shirt is Nanas.
In the holding cel Hunter is thinking about friday night if someone has seen him.
He remembers that an old tall man with crooked teeths and ragged suit has asked him for money.

Chapter 33 : I want it real

Mike was angry as he saw the wig on his mother corpse,
because he wanted it "real" at the funeral.
He would have rather seen her with her head bald

Chapter 34 : The bells

Chris is watching TV as the deliverboy come.
After he has signed he goes to the boxes that the boy delivered
and opened it.
There were different size of bells.
the bigger the bell isthe better is the relationship between
Chris &Claudes parents and who gets the gift.
He plays a little bit with them and goes upside watching TV
to kill the hours before going to his aunt's cocktail party

Chapter 35 : Thought about the dead

The teachers said Mike is a thinker.
He thinks a lot of things as hef look at her mothers coffin.
About the things before and after the dead

Chapter 36 : The cocktail party

Chris and Clade smokes a joint together before going to the cocktail party.
Then theye were there their aunti wants to introduce them to someone.
Chris does tequila sots and Chris thinks about what the older woman look like naked.
Then they met Marcella an unpublished novelist she tries to be "cool"
and hip.But it doesn't work.
As she says that she is a Beatles fan Claude says Fuck the Beatles.

Chapter 37 : Midnight

Jessica has taken all the “Twelve” by midnight, which she has saved for New Year’s Eve.
When she woke up her sheets were damp with sweat.

Chapter 38 : Alice

The boy that White Mike sells to reminds him of the summer than he has worked
at a camp.
He remembered the time with Alice than they hang out behind the boathouse and talks
about their first thing they've done in life.
He rembered that she said that he should read a book named "The Plague".

Than he is passing Barnes & Noble he has bought the book
and read it at home.

Chapter 39 : The Uzi

After the party Claude calls Tobias to go with him
back to the place where they have bought their weapons.
Than they were waling downtown Chris starts to run away from him
cause he decided to stay alone.
Than he enters the store he is looking for something special
and he get it from the cashier an uzi .

Chapter 40 : The nightmare

WHile White Mike is reading "The Plague" he fells asleep.
He dreams that he stands at a swaying building in an empty city.
It is raining and storming.
He feels himself flailing on the way down.
He fell and fell and see his body crushes the car.
Lying down like like the final scence in a movie.

Chapter 41 : Alice & Mike

White Mike and Alice were walking down the beach in East Hampton.
She tells me about her parents and boarding school ,it was bad.
Then it was getting dark and cold she took off her clothes and she runs into the ocean.
She came out laughing,crying and freezing all at the same time.

Chapter 21-30

2008-03-16T13:18:00.001-07:00

Chapter 21 : The new house

After the breast cancer of White Mikes mum ,White Mike has moved with his father
in a new house.
Now it is three and a half years ago.
The most things is stacked haphazardly.
It was the first night in his room.

Chapter 22 : The wile

Sarah goes to Chris because she wants to make a big party on New Year's eve at Chris house.
Chris and Sarah move to Chris room.
Sarah tries to convince Chris to throw a big party at his house
but he doesn't seem to be happy about it ,so Sarah begins to play with
her womanly wiles and get his suggestion for throwing a big party on New Year's.

Chapter 23 : The deal with Jessica

White Mike is walking down the Lexington toward Ninety-first Street to sell "Twelve"
to Jessica.
Lionel is with him a creepy dude with his brown and yellow bloodshot eyes.
He is carrying a gun and has a son named Jeremy.
She buys five tiny Baggies for thousand dollars after the deal she asks for Lionel’s number.

Chapter 24 : The favorite drink of White Mikes mother

White Mike wakes up and poures himself a champagne flute of undiluted cranberry juice,
this was his mother´s favorite drink.
His mother said to Michael that he should always live the best live he can.

Live the best live , Michael..

Chapter 25 : The truth behind Charlies disappearance

After Jessica walks away , White Mike asks Lionel for his cousin Charlie.
Mike says that Lionel should tell him that he's looking for him.
Charlie is the cousin of Mike and he is in the same age.
They grew up and spend the most time together and
look like brothers nearly twins.

Mike thinks that Charlie has taken distance of him
but it's wrong he still doesn't know that Charlie get killed by Lionel

Chapter 26 : The walk

Jessica walks down the Fifth Avenue and is proud of the
drugs he has bought.

Chapter 27 : The reason why White Mike doesn't take drugs

Hunter asked Mike why he didn't take drugs and he answered that
he never had the urge

Chapter 28 : Charlies Travel

Mike rememberes the time as Charlie wanted to fly to florida.
He hadn't enough money so he pawned the necklace of his mum
and bought a weapon in the same shop.
As Charlie's mum came back and noticed the necklace was "stolen"
she fired the maid and claimed for an influence.
Mike convinced Charlie to tell her the truth
and he did it.
It ends up in influenced fraud and Charlie had to go into a bootcamp

Chapter 29 : Tobias

Tobias has a meeting with his model-agency.
He was discovered, when he was eleven
Now he wants to become a full-time model after finishing the high school.
He was thinking about a tattoo above his ass.
Then he goes to the waiting room there is a beautiful girl,probably a model
and he thinks about how much he would like to sleep with her.

Chapter 30 : Molly

The girl he wants to sleep with is Molly.
She is sixteen and isn't interested in Tobi.
She had unrequited crush on Mike in her eighth grade year.

HOW LOW CAN THE CRIME RATE GO?

2008-03-11T15:10:00.000-07:00

You : do you think the crime rate will go any lower?
Mr.X:I don't think so because we reached a high level of low crime rate
and crime will ever exists it can't be erased.
Now it is the limit that we can reach unless the crime rate is true

What is Kellys purpose?

2008-03-11T14:57:00.001-07:00

You : What do you think what Kellys purpose is ?
Mrx: hm.. i think her purpose is to get closer with the offenders
especially the latins and black guys and try to help them out of the vicious circle.
There are still good black and latin guys outwhere... they just have to be guide in the
right direction ..

What is Bloomberg´s goal and how does he want to reach them?

2008-03-11T14:35:00.000-07:00

You : What is Bloomberg´s goa ?
Mr.X : His goal is to keep the crime rate down
while improving community relations at the same time

You : And how does he want to reach them ?
Mr.X: He uses his own stragedy which is called ,,quality of life offenses"
one part of the stragedy is not to let offenders with small crimes away.
the other part is to put trouble people in a register then it would be easier
and quicker to react.
All in all it is a good stragedy how do I know it ?
it's easy ,you just have to look up the crime rate then you will see it
and it seems to be that the crime rate will going less more
because they still rasp on the stragedy to become smarter and smarter

Chart of murders & burglarys

2008-03-11T14:16:00.001-07:00

Mindmap

2008-03-11T13:34:00.001-07:00

The Breakfast

2008-03-04T09:51:00.000-08:00

The Breakfast

Claude entered the kitchen while Chris is making breakfast

Chris : good morning
Claude : morning

silence ....

Chris : why didn't you join the party ?
Claude : I had something to do
Chris : hmm .. there were beautiful girls..
Claude : so what ?
Chris : are you gay ? or what?!
Claude : shut the fuck up !

Claude goes out of the kitchen

Chris whispered
yeah you had something to do .... to phone with your boyfriend

Chapter 11 - 20

2008-03-02T04:53:00.000-08:00

Chapter 11 : Where's your brother?

Sarah is just one hour at the party and get bored.
She doesn't smoke a joint or drink a beer.
She only asks for Chris Brother Claude.

Chapter 12 : Claude & Tobias

Chris´s brother Claude and his friend Tobias walking down the Malberry Street.
They are walking through Chinatown to buy some weapons.
After he has bought his weapons in a trinket shop he goes home
[the party is still going on].
He goes to his room and takes all his clothes out of his wardrobe
and put them under his bed
then he puts all his weapons in the wardrobe.
It looks like a privat shrine.

Claude is six feet two inches tall and he's strong (not like his brother ).
he has a pefect skin and an angular face.
He listens to rap and metal and he used to do blizzards of cocaine.
He isn't a good studen or an athelet.

Tobias is a pretty boy and works as a part-time model.

Chapter 13 : Mikes Room & Reference

White Mike is a fan of Samurais since he was a little kid.
Now he lives in an apartment with his father, but he never sees him.
He forces himself to do things and after he does all those things.
He sits on his desk and organized his Weed for selling.

Chapter 14 : The strange favour

Chris went to the bathroom and he found Jessica lying on the ground.
He looks at he for a long time and he likes to stare at a live girl like this.

Chapter 15 : The rapist

When White was in the tenth-grade there was a rapist at large,
the Upper East Side Rapist.
Some girl named Megan asks Mike to walk home with her,
because she's afraid of getting raped.
So he walks with her home.

Chapter part II 16 : The Investigation

The detectives is at the rec because of the double murder at the Jefferson Houses.
At the rec they asks Arturo about Nana he tells them a lot of lies.
The other players know that he is telling lies but they haven't say anything,
so the police bringing Hunter for questioning.
[He couldn’t believe it was too easy because of the blood on Hunter’s clothes]
He doesn't know who he should call,
because his parents are in Europe and Mike is a drug dealer but then he remembers Andrew,
Andrew’s father is working together with his father so maybe he can help him.
So he calls Andrew's father meanwhile s sample of the blood on his shirt is on the way to the lab

Chapter 17 : The Central Zoo Park with Warrens Nanny

As Mike [ Michael ] walk through the Park he remembers
the time with his friends Hunter,Warren and Charlie.
He remembers how fun it was to go with them in the Central Park Zoo
and how nice Warrrens Nanny is who has raised them up.
And he is imagine what she would say and what he would say if he would see her.

Chapter 18 : The Accident

Jessica gets up at eleven o´clock and remembers that Chris put her in a cab.
Today she has a date with her three girls they want to go ice-skating.
She knows she's smarter than they but few fundamental things hold them together :
Who is cool ,who not ;

No sex before the time is right but blow job is okay ;
e.t.c.

They are all pretty and good skinned and don't eat fastfood.
While they are skating and giggling a gawky kid named Andrew slips and falls in front of them.
They try to veer out but Jessica is unable to make it and one of her skates cuts his forehead.
He has to go to Hospital.

Andrew is a distract person and maybe gay.

Chapter 19 : The call

The girls are totally freaked out and go to the Jackson Hole to have a hot chocolate together.
But as they are on the Fith Avenue Jessica heads a different direction to make a call.
She thanks Chris for has taken her in a cab and asks for the new drug "twelve".

Chapter 20 : The first contact : Sarah & Andrew

Andrew has to stay at the Lenox Hill Hospital for obervation for six hours,
because the stiches are so close to his eye.
He shars a room with Sarahs Ludolow's boyfriend Sean.
He was the captain of the football team, skier at vall and has brown hairs.
He was there because of a car accident.
Sean and Sarah talk a while but he doesn't seem very interested to talk with Sarah
unlike Andrew.
As Sarah heard what kind of music Andrew listen to she likes it
cause she listen to the same music and she hasn't the CD Album yet so Andrew lend it to her
about to see her again.

Chapter 1 - 10

2008-03-02T04:32:00.000-08:00

Chapter 1 : White Mike

White Mike is a good student and takes out of school for about 1 year or more
before he goes to college .
White Mike has never smoked or took any drugs , he's clean and a good drug dealer.
His drug career starts with an one shot deal with his cousin Charlie.

When he first starts to deal it was summer ,
he tries to stay awake as long as he can.
It is 3 days ago since he has slept , he feels good.
That is what he has said as his good friend Mike has asked him
but in the reality he gets scary , so scary that the people will flinch if they see him
and he gets a little bit crazy, he runs howls and barks after private school kids,
just because they say Madman to him.

In the Park Avenue he remembers the night
when his mother has been still alive and tells him about the chaos theory.
He still knows every word she has said .
The words is still on his mind .

Chapter 2 :Hunter and Nana

It is teeen night twenty blocks uptown the Rec.
Mike and Hunter McCulloch is also there.
Hunter is a likeable guy and no one thinks about him less.
He is 6 feet tall , a beef kid and has the best ups of anybody but he has the
worst ball-handling skills.

As Nana , the best ball handler on the court sees Mike has replaced Nanas position
he wants his spot back.
But those "nigga" on the court wants to play with Mike and not with Nana.
Nana is pissed of and after a time they starts to fight.
After a few punches and kicks other kids pull them away.
The both fighter are covered with blood,
but Arturo a short Puerto Rican wants to see more fight
so he calls Hunter a pussy.
Hunter is crazed and throw the basketball against Aturos head.
It was so hard thats hitting him dead on.

Chapter 3 : The old times

As Mike walks into the gym he saw a strong black kid who are covered with blood
and as he is inside the gym he sees Hunter and the floor which is covered with blood ,too.
In his mind he knows what has happened , but he has asked Hunter anyway.
After that they go to Mc Donald and talks about the past and the future about
going to Harvord together then it would be like in the past.
The 3 would be together again Mike , Hunter and Warren.
They are still in the past with their minds
as the beeper of Mike begin to vibrate and he gotta go.

Chapter 4 : The Chaos Theory

As Mike has had waiting for a customer on the East End Avenue he has seen
the effect of an cigarette lit.
The cigarette lit generate a chain reaction and
He has seen that this little thing can makes people homeless.

explanation : Chaos theory http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Chaos_theory

Chapter 5 : Hunter

While Hunter is walking home he listens to James Taylor
it is a little secret of him that he listens to softer music
and it doesn't bother him cause he suspects that everybody listens to
softer music and hide it.
After he gets home his father calls him and complaining about his life
he is so thinking about his self that he hasn't even noticed the blood.
His father is a tall man taller than Hunter and always drinking
like what Hunter mothers do.
They are always away.
Hunters mothers is in europe the continent where his father
tomorrow should go.
After he listens to his father as much as he can take he goes to
his room.

Chapter 6 : Nana's Death

Nana is going home as he has seen 2 guys on the far side of the doorway.
He thinks it must be some kind of deal.
As the white guy tries to kill the other he has gotten hit and killed by a gun.
Nana tries to run away but it was useless.
He has gotten killed , too .

Chapter 7 : Sarah Ludlow

Sarah is walking with her girlfriend to Chris house party,
by the way they slaq about their schoolmates.
Sarah is by far the beautiest girl in her school.
The "charts" prove it.
She got long legs , large breasts , blond hair , blue eyes and high cheekbones.

Chapter 8 : The Reason why they wanna be rich

chris handed Mike 100 dollars and than he asks him if he wants to come in.
He doesn't and glances his back .
He sees the beautiful girl and "admire"her for a second and goes away.
As he walks down the street he thinks about how rich everyone is and
that you wanted to be like this.

Chapter 9 : Chris

Chris is seventeen and a half years old and has dark blond hairs and blue eyes
and is good looking exept of the acne.
He is throwing parties to find the right girl.
He hasn't much luck with girls.
The last girl has broken his finger as he has tried to ease her pants down.
Since this accident he has lost his confident.
While he is walking with Sarah through the house he thinks about
what it would be like to fuck her and not just hook up with some drunk girl
at one of his parties, like is happening in a different room , where a girl named
Jessica is making out with a guy that no one knows who he is.
After he comes in his pants he goes out of the room to get a beer
and Jessica goes to the toilet.

Chapter 10 : Jessica and "twelve"

Jessica is a good student and pretty girl but she has an inferiority complex
if she compared herself with Sarah.
Because she isn't flawless like her.
Jessica has a ceamy skin, long brown hair ,large breasts, thin lips
and a jock body.(Because of swimming and soccer).
She goes to the toilet to do some coke before the drunk boy comes,
but it isn't coke that she has in her baggie.
It is "twelve".
As she sniffs it Abraham Lincoln comes into her mind and she starts to giggle and everything changes
when she takes it again the tingling gets fuller and goes from her spine into the back of her head
and after a few seconds she lays on the ground.